This week room 12 has been writing about this picture. First we used our senses to see how it will feel being in a trench. We described what we could hear, smell, see and feel. Once we had all our describing words we picked 3 strong words and had to make 3 sentences. After that we had to use our 3 strong sentences to make a paragraph and from a paragraph we were able to write a story.
Here's an excerpt from my writing: The scared soldiers wore their protection and stood behind the sandbags with their survival kit in case they got shot.......
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Kia Ora Pareata
It was cool how half of our school went in front of the school and planted the white crosses. Especially how you said the speech. Did you know that it was only four years until the War ended. Did you plant the Cross.
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